So Pheathon lives in Glendale Arizona with his mom and goes to an uppity private school, but all of his friends are wealthy and live in extravagant houses, while he only affords the public school because his stepdad is the principal there. He is going to prove to his friends that he does fit in as his dad is the golden Hollywood actor Pheobus Sun. Nobody believes him so he goes west to his dads home in Beverly Hills. His dad loves him and says he can have anything he wants and Pheathon asks to drive his Gold Ferrari. He wants to refuse, but he cant break his word so his maids open the gate. His son ends up crashing even though he warned him to stay off the highway and not go too slow or too fast as he needed to keep with traffic. Pheathon crashes and the car catches on fire and he dies. His dad is extremely upset as he feels it is his fault.
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Character Planning:
Pheobus Sun- Celebrity parent, lives in Beverly Hills as Hollywood's top actor. Claim to fame is his bleach blonde hair and golden skin. Son comes and asks to drive gold Ferrari, he has servants and maids that obey. Warns his son to stay away from I-10, the major highway in LA and to not change go to fast or too slow as traffic is dangerous and the Ferrari is hard to control.
Pheathon- Pheobus' son, wants to prove to his friends back home in Glendale Arizona that he does fit in with their high rolling lifestyle. He plans to drive the new Ferrari no matter what his dad warns. Is told to not go into the next town as it is dangerous but he secretly plans to go to Glendale. He ends up crashing and a fiery explosion occurs as he went too fast even though his dad warned him.
Bibliography:
Source Stories- Ovid's Metamorphoses by Tony Kine
Ovid's Metamorphoses
-Pheathon and the Sun
-Pheathon's Ride
I would really like to read your story when you are done with it! The ending was so sudden and unexpected, which I loved.
ReplyDeleteThe picture of the gold Ferrari was definitely a nice visual touch. It was very creative to set the story in Hollywood. It might be cool to do some more character development on the mom and stepdad; I just found myself wondering what they were like!